I took The Edge to my writers’ group and read the ending. Not too many notes, but useful. I applied them.
Now I think I’ll wait and give it another pass in a couple of weeks. I forgot I had planned to submit it to Analog, so that will be the next step. Of course if it gets bought I’ll have to write two new stories instead of one before putting out a new book, but I think the payoff, financial and otherwise, would be worth it.
In the meantime, I’ll move on to The Way, which needs a new title among other things.
Once more into the breech…